Corvin Vandra

Awesome story. I agree with Gryphon, you have a very pretty style. But it just seems like the little girl is so seperate from everything. Myabe that is the point, ...

Hahaha, yeah I placed it wrong. N00b's mistake won't happen again. It was late and I jsut had to get it out. Thanks for the crits, I appreciate it.

There's no rhyme scheme here. Just raw emotion. Enjoy. † † † † † † † † † † † † † † † † † I was a waste, ...

I loved it, really. I'd love to hear that some time. Solid all around, but I'm no expert I hate to say. Keep it up, can't wait to read more.

I liked it. Yeah, every band needs a whiny song, but this one was good. But what do I know I listen to The Police.

Hello Veteran (or not so veteran) members. I'm new around these parts. Not sure why I'm letting you know, just seemed like the smart thing to do. Let me know ...